THE PROVERBIAL PLOT
by A K Tutler
WE
might also head this paper "Titles by
Quotation," as it was a consideration of this
phenomenon in literature that first moved us
to weigh the possibilities of plots from proverbs, fables,
and fairy tales. The Bible has ever lent great aid to
fiction writers in the matter of titles. Kipling is
perhaps its most obvious debtor. A title like Edith
Wharton's "The Valley of Decision" is a case in point.
But the discussion of that is old ground. Our thought
progressed from it to consideration of other aids to
the harassed author. After all, no matter how well
you can write, what the outrageous public demands is
that you shall have something to write about. Here
the invention of many writers flags. We offer a Great
Cure, a Millennial Discovery. Hear! Hear! Oyez!
Oyez!
To trespass upon the ground of Constant Reader,
whose memories of old books follow our own attempt
to be sprightly upon this page, our attention was
recently called to a work published in 1874 and penned
by Thackeray's daughter, Anne Isabella Thackeray,
Lady Ritchie. It was entitled "Bluebeard's Keys."
Its little novels or long stories were in reality new
illustrations of old fables and fairy tales. The title
story was a variation of the Bluebeard theme.
Now there is no reason why the magazine writer
whenever hard up for a plot should not turn immediately
to the fables and fairy stories of his youth.
The whole thing is merely to change the seetting,
modernize the version. The Cinderella motif is, of course,
a common one in all fiction, constantly recurring.
"Little Red Riding Hood" often serves a renewed
purpose, in the perduring story of Innocence beset by
Craft or, to be modern, Krafft-Ebbing. Elizabeth
Robins some time ago put forth a sensational variant
in "My Little Sister." Many changes could be rung
upon "Beauty and the Beast," also and so on.
Yet it is in the Proverbs of all Nations that, we
feel, an even greater mine of material lies. They are
specially qualified to jog genius or even talent to
renewed narration. Keep books of proverbs nigh to
supply plot germs and additional complications for that
story you are writing!
Consider how many modern business stories involve
such adages as "A rolling Stone gathers no Moss,"
"All that Glitters is not Gold." "Money Makes the
Mare go." With such simple and homely foundations
to build upon, your tale is sure to take the public,
whose lives, after all, are rooted in ancient adages and
who comport themselves largely according to the
dictates of proverbial wisdom handed down from generation
to generation.
Think how many times in moments of crisis your
own expression regarding a given situation has been
in words approximating those of some proverb stored
away in your memory from early parental injunctions!
Then let us consider the possibilitie of a few of these.
Here are some English proverbs:
A crooked stick will have a crooked shadow.
Some have been thought brave because they were afraid to run.
What a dust I have raised, quoth the fly upon the coach.
A wreck on shore is a beacon at sea.
The fire in the flint shows not till it is struck.
Does not each one of these suggest a situation,
perhaps a number of different situations, according to
the differences of the minds pondering them? Our
suggestion is to start with the situation indicated by
one proverb, and, whenever ingenuity slackens, have
recourse to another. We could do very well with
these:
Jemmy Wiggle's father was a crooked stick, so
Jemmy grew up a pickpocket. He was not only a
crook but a coward. One day he was confronted by
a runaway. Afraid to flee, frightened by the thundering
hoofs approaching, he sprang for the bridle and
thus rescued the daughter of Silas Vile, the richest man
in Manhattan. The daughter had been riding in
Central Park, where Jemmy was lurking to "reef
leather." Jemmy became very proud of himself and
believed he was all he seemed. He began to feel his own
importance and reform the one always brings
about the other! He is on the eve of marrying the
daughter of Silas Vile. Then comes his father's death,
which, through deathbed injunction to honesty,
proves a beacon to the starved soul of Jemmy now
blossoming into all sorts of things. But Silas Vile
discovers that Jemmy's father has been a notorious
bootlegger and Silas Vile is running for office on a
ticket strictly blue. Therefore he is about to kick
Jemmy out. Jemmy, however, comes up to the scratch
manfully in standing up for the "old man," now passed
over the Great Divide. He demonstrates unfaltering
filial devotion. This is one quality old Silas Vile
admires more than anything else. He capitulates. After
a terribly dramatic and emotional scene, Silas places
Jemmy's hand in that of Myra Gwendolynne.
A story with poignant possibilities isn't it? And
yet the amount of thinking involved to create it has
been entirely supplied by a sequence of proverbs taken
at random! Take any number of proverbs and shake
them all up in a hat! That's what we're going to
do the next time we write a yarn. You can make
them symbolical of so many different things. And in
this hot weather one just naturally hates to do much
independent ratiocinating.
We have hardly begun to develop Jemmy Wiggle's
story. Of course we gave you the barest outline!
But it should be a real pleasure to you, if you
are a real writer, to fill in with deft characterization
and vivid, throbbing description, the framework we
furnish. And never let us hear you say again that
you don't know what to write about, not so long as
there are handy books of proverbs to be bought for a
few cents at any reputable bookstore!
A. K. TUTLER.